Many Manufactured Food and Drink Products

Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.

Do you agree or disagree?

This essay question is from Cambridge IELTS 16 Test 3 Writing Task 2.

Sample Essay

Many processed foods and drinks are packed with sugar and this leads to many health issues. I agree that, to reduce sugar consumption, sugar-packed products should be sold at a higher price.

Many people over-consume sugary products because they are cheap. For example, in the United States, many fast-food restaurants offer free refills on sodas. As a result, customers tend to have two or even three sodas at a meal. If these restaurants were required to implement a 20% tax on these drinks and stop supplying free refills, many customers probably wouldn’t order one at all, let alone have a second one. A regulation like this could be extremely effective in terms of preventing obesity among low-income people since many of them are high consumers of cheap sugar-sweetened foods and beverages.

In addition, making high-sugar products more expensive can promote healthier eating choices. This is because if the prices of these products increase to a point at which people are unable to afford them regularly, they may turn to foods that are healthier and more affordable. For instance, if a can of strawberry-flavored beverage costs 3 times the price of a box of fresh strawberries, why not choose the cheaper fresh fruits which can also satisfy a craving for sugar. Although fresh fruits also contain sugars, natural sugars are much healthier than added ones.

In conclusion, sugar-sweetened products should be made more costly to reduce sugar intake. For one thing, the over-consumption of these products is partly because of their low cost. For another, increasing their price could encourage people to choose healthier food.

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  • sugar-sweetened foods and beverages

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  1. In modern society, with the development of technology, a lot of manufactured food and drink products have been released to people, and it contains a lot of additional ingredients with sugar. From the perspective of ordinary people, foods and drinks which contain a lot of sugar will have detrimental effects on people’s health and it is partly true. However, companies should not decide to increase the price of sugary products to decrease people’s consumption because it is consumers’ own decision.
    Nowadays, people, who have interested in increasing their health, argue that the price of sugary products should increase in order to protect children’s as well as adults’ health because it contains harmful ingredients in people’s health. With the development of technology, companies create countless manufactured sugary products due to a lot of consumption. The reason why a lot of companies create and release sugary products despite people’s complaints and bad recognition about their products is a lot of consumption. There is no one who enforces to consume sugary products, it is their own choice whether it is harmful or not. Therefore, it is an unreasonable opinion to increase the price of products, which contain a lot of sugar.
    Furthermore, companies’ technological level has been surprisingly increasing compared to past products. In other words, they are developed sugary products healthier than before. This is because people’s perspective about food and drink products is dramatically increasing and they trying to compare each product which one is better for their health. In this situation, in order to compete with other products, companies should focus on developing their products healthier in order to increase their net profit. With the ㅇdemands of people and the purpose of companies, harmful factors of products are gradually mitigating, and health factors are increasing at the same time when companies release products. Therefore, people’s worries about sugar products are decreasing, so, the opinion that sugary products’ prices should increase to protect people in terms health is not necessary.
    In conclusion, although there is no doubt that products which contain a lot of sugar can have detrimental effects on people’s health and they should consume some extent of a number of sugary products in order to protect their health, it is unnecessary opinion to increase sugary products prices so as to consume lesser amount of sugar than before because it is consumers own choices with the development of products’ beneficial ingredients.

  2. It is a fact that the large amount of sugar contained in majority of edible commodities being produced is the leading cause of many diseases. This essay agrees that increasing the tariff on these food products will reduce their rate of consumption by lowering demand and using money realized on health campaigns.

    Increasing the price of sweetened foods will reduce the number of consumers. This is because the high price will naturally limit the customer window since few persons will be able to afford the products. For example, this was the case in Exeter, when the government charged higher tax on beverages with high percentage of sugar. Survey revealed a sharp decline in the sales of those products and interestingly, there was a conspicuous rise in the sales of the alternative low sugar product.

    Additionally, health programs can be sponsored with the extra charges generated from making sugary foods expensive. The reason is to create awareness and educate the masses on the dangers of these products. Moreso, certain medical tests such as blood glucose levels can be carried out in these outreaches freely so that those already affected can seek medical treatment. For instance, during the campaign against diabetes in my community, information regarding this disease spread like wildfire that even my grandparents chose to make the necessary lifestyle choice.

    In conclusion, raising the price of food items with high sugar contents which causes many health issues will be effective because it reduces demand and the proceeds from the extra charges can utilized for awareness creation. Hence, this essay supports this view as necessary to curbing the menace.

  3. Mine is DISAGREE. Can anyone give me some advice on improvement?
    Sugary products are becoming popular in the recent year, thus leading to a rise of health problems among the consumers. However, I think it is unreasonable to raise their price in order to prevent over sugar consumption.
    Processed food and beverages with high sugar level are preferred because they are cheap, they comes in great quantities, they are tasty and they took only 5 to 10 minutes to be prepared. In such a busy word where everyone all try to catch up the fast pace, these sugary products are the most suitable choice. Who wants to spend 30 minutes or more to wait for a 2-course meal when you can have a full and quick lunch with the same amount of time. Sugar-packed food is made to meet the need in this hard-pressed word.
    Moreover, raising the price of processed food is just pointless if the price of the healthy one is still the same, which was already considered expensive. This can lead to a crisis in low-income community, whose spending will become tighter, barely cover all of their living standard. Instead, fast food company should come up with new and healthier diet with a relatively same price to their old products. By changing the product itself can we change the customers’ behaviour.
    In conclusion, I do not believe pushing the price of sugary product is a great idea. They were born to satisfy the requirement of a busy world, and the best way to reduce their impact is change them into something better.

  4. Instead of increasing prices of these items, it’s better to lower the sugar content while manufacturing. Company should focus more on producing healthy food and drink. Moreover, they can provide customers with variety of products as per need. For instance, sugar free biscuits for people suffering from diabetis or diet coke.

    1. Hello Prakash it’s clearly a agree/ disagree question and not a problem solution one. I think it’s better to stick to the question type that’s given and leave it at that.

  5. Soft drinks that contain a high amount of glucose, is the main cause of numerous diseases for the human body. Authorities ought to take decisions to make them costly to discourage people to avoid using them. I completely agree that this is the best way to avoid such beverages.
    Some Evident drawbacks of using those fizzy and sugary fluids are, it leads to Diabetes and Heart diseases. And the reason for that it contains an excessive amount of carbohydrates that create fat in the body. To illustrate further, the Fat put a strain on the pancreas that creates insulin for the organs which lead to Hyperglycemia. Furthermore, it slows the blood flow in the veins results, in rising blood pressure causing cardiovascular issues.
    Governing bodies should also think for alternatives that are healthy. To illustrate, they should promote the usage of fresh fruit juices and make a few steps so that they are easily obtainable to the consumers and in attractive packings to entice them largely adolescents.
    There must be laws that should apply the taxes on these kinds of products available in the market. Soda drinkables that contain a high amount of carbohydrates should be sold for some extra price. To show you what I mean, if natural fruit juices are going to sell for $1 then they should be trading at the price of $3. That’s how the customer will keep away from those due to its rate. Another way is that ministry should also drive the awareness program so that the buyers should avoid them naturally by knowing their adverse effects.
    In conclusion, high

  6. There are plenty of processed foods and drinks are packed with sugars lead to lots of health issues. I completely disagree with the idea that the price of sugary products should be made more expensive to discourage consumers to stop buying or using them.
    There are several reasons that why sugar products should be made at regular prices that consumers can afford. Firstly, it is extremely unfair to the shoppers because buying sugary goods is a personal choice, and the expensive prices will not stop them from buying these products. However, they will face stressful finance if they continue to purchase these expensive things. Secondly, selling sugary items at an expensive price will not benefit ordinary people who need them in their daily life, while these companies which make sugary products will make a large profit. Finally, taking moderate sugary things is necessary for building a healthy system since sweets always can make us happy, if we can not afford sweets which mean we lose one of the ways to get happiness.
    I believe that there are more effective ways to decrease the consumption of sugary goods. One of the best ways is for the government should educate the public that absorbing too much sugar harm people’s health just like alcohol and cigarette. It is much better to effect regulations on making sugary products company that using nature plant sugar to make sugary things, not other human-made sugars. Moreover, the government should ask the company to stick a label in each pack of sugary things, such as “less sugar less danger” this kind of sign. Lastly, if the media always advertising the side effects from over-taken sugars then it will deter customers from eating too much of it.
    In conclusion, my view is that sugar products should not be more expensive so that customers can afford them without financial stress. And it is better for government to get the public educated about the harmfulness of over-taken sugar.

    1. It is not a problem solution essay. They have just asked whether increasing the sugary products prices will encourage users to less sugar or not? So, be at one side.

  7. It is commonly perceived that high amount of sugar affects bad our health system. I should beside this idea for variety of reasons, but mainly to reduce sugar consumption and the amount of sugar should be expensive.
    It is widely acknowledged that, many people consume high levels of sugar because of cheap. Reducing sugar consumption have many benefits such as to prevent heart diseases and diabetes. In addition, obesity is caused by sugar-sweetened foods and beverages too.
    Afterwards, making sugar-products more expensive can promote healthier eating choices such they prefer home-cooked meals rather than sugary products. Besides that, many junk foods have plenty amount of sugar. If the prices of these products increase to a point at which people unable to afford them regularly, they begin to choose healthier and affordable meals. For instance, strawberries are more expensive than strawberry-flavored beverage, otherwise, if it were the other way around, people would choose strawberries, and that would be good for their health.
    To sum up, this discussion, reducing sugar consumption and increasing the amount of sugar are the key of healthy system. They help to prevent a few diseases and to choose healthier meals.

  8. i need feedback!! can i achieve a 6.5 for this???

    A large number of food and soft drinks now consist of high levels of sugar that leads to serious health problems. Products containing too much sugar are ought to be made more expensive so that people will not buy sugary products more often. While I do agree that production of sugar in either diets or drinks should be reduced so people will not have problems in health such as diabetes disease, I disagree that sugar should be made higher prices to make people get rid of sugar.

    On the one hand, if an individual cannot avoid using too much sugar in a day, he/she may have to face some incurable diseases such as diabetes and obesity. For example, there is a growing body of research which suggests that more than 50% of people who take advantage of sugary products are patients in a hospital and they may have been cured for a long time but it turns out it will be hard for them to get over these dangerous diseases. Also, sugar contains many sweeteners provided in soft drinks especially Pepsi, Coca. For instance, many people say that they work in a factory which produces sugary drinks and one of those admitted putting a large amount of sugar in their drinks or even fast foods so that more and more products can be placed on the market and approach more people, which leads to health issues related to sugar.

    On the other hand, governments should not suggest retailers push the price of sugary products so that people are hardly able to buy sweet products. But it should not be applied as no one can live without sugar in life. To illustrate this point, researchers have shown that we need sugar to survive although eating a lot of sugar is not good at all. Moreover, people should not be encouraged to use less sugar, just use however they want, but not to consume too much of it. Sugar also has an important aspect in life so the price of sugar should remain stable. For example, sugar plays an important role in making many scrumptious dishes such as bun dau. Without it, the dish will taste awful so it is not vital for supermarkets to increase the price of sugary products.

    In conclusion, many dangerous health problems still occur in children and the elderly due to high usage of sugar. However, it is not really necessary for markets to raise the price of sugary products to make people use less sugar.

    1. I will appreciate if you tell me what band I will get for this.

      Nowadays, people are exposed to many health issues due to their lifestyle. They prefer having ready made food and cold drinks to go with that contain hug amount of sugar. However, if the price of the product is increased then people will think before spending money on food and drinks. I agree, to reduce sugar consumption, product should be made expensive.
      Due to busy lifestyle more population prefer outside food rather than making at home and because of its affordable price. For example, cold drinks are very cheap in USA as compared to healthy food which attract consumers, they sell large size coke for a dollar in mcd. These products contain large amount of unwanted ingredients which may lead to unhealthy lifestyle, many products contain sugar which can increase the glucose level in the body. Sweet products also effect the fat level of body, consuming more sweet product result into weight gain and due to weight gain many people suffer from joint problems and they may not fit in to their old cloths. Having more weight than required according to your height will made you do surgery to reduce your health issues. But if these products made expensive, common people would not afford to buy these and will consume less sugar. Also, rose in price will make people think of spending many on things which are not good for their health.
      although, some people do exercise and burn fat to balance the healthy lifestyle but the ratio of health conscious to lazy people who procrastinate going gym is less and this big portion of population needs to cut off their sugar to live good and worry-free life. If people get sugary product at cheaper price they will have more and harm themselves.
      In conclude, sugar- sweetened product should be more costly than healthy products to reduce its intake and to encourage people to consume less sugar. I believe over consumption of these products is due to less cost.

  9. Soft drinks that contain a high amount of glucose, is the main cause of numerous diseases for the human body. Authorities ought to take decisions to make them costly to discourage people to avoid using them. I completely agree that this is the best way to avoid such beverages.
    Some Evident drawbacks of using those fizzy and sugary fluids are, it leads to Diabetes and Heart diseases. And the reason for that it contains an excessive amount of carbohydrates that create fat in the body. To illustrate further, the Fat put a strain on the pancreas that creates insulin for the organs which lead to Hyperglycemia. Furthermore, it slows the blood flow in the veins results, in rising blood pressure causing cardiovascular issues.
    Governing bodies should also think for alternatives that are healthy. To illustrate, they should promote the usage of fresh fruit juices and make a few steps so that they are easily obtainable to the consumers and in attractive packings to entice them largely adolescents.
    There must be laws that should apply the taxes on these kinds of products available in the market. Soda drinkables that contain a high amount of carbohydrates should be sold for some extra price. To show you what I mean, if natural fruit juices are going to sell for $1 then they should be trading at the price of $3. That’s how the customer will keep away from those due to its rate. Another way is that ministry should also drive the awareness program so that the buyers should avoid them naturally by knowing their adverse effects.
    In conclusion, high carbohydrate liquid refreshments are not suitable to consume, and they must be intimidated in society and it can be done by making them unaffordable to some extent.

    Kindly comment for my improvement

  10. Please give me your advice, Thank you!

    Many processed food and drink are high in sugar, which lead to many health issues. High-sugar products should be charged with higher tax to encourage people to eat less sugar. This essay agrees with this view because a cheap price is the main reason why so many people are choosing them and this will also promote people to opt for healthier food.

    The principal reason why sugar-packed food should be more expensive is that inexpensive price allow a lot of people to purchase them. This is because when the price of these food is cheap and affordable, people can easily choose them without thinking. As a result, more and more people will consume unhealthy food. However, if the price is higher, people will have to consider the cost and compare with other alternative options before they make decisions on what to buy. For example, in China, many shop owners saw that, after the government increased the tax on sugary drinks, the total sale of those drinks went down.

    Another reason why increasing the price of unhealthy food make sense is that it will promote consuming healthy food. In other words, healthy food in supermarkets are normally more expensive, but if the price of sugary food is increased, and the healthier food remains the same, people will be more likely to choose healthier options. For instance, after Chinese government have imposed higher tax on processed food in supermarkets, a lot of local food markets where lots of fresh goods are available became more popular.

    In conclusion, this essay agrees with that high-sugar food should be more expensive because it will lower the demand of unhealthy food and promote healthier food consumption.

    1. The essay question is about sugary products, not unhealthy food. There is a lot of unhealthy food that doesn’t contain any sugar, such as hamburgers. You’re not on topic when using ‘unhealthy food’.

      I don’t think the example in your first body paragraph has much to do with the main idea of this paragraph.

      “promote people to opt for healthier food”
      It’s grammatically correct but unidiomatic. Use ‘encourage’ instead.

      “inexpensive price allow PRICES ATTRACT a lot of people to purchase them”

      “promote consuming healthy food”
      It’s better to say “promote the consumption of healthy food”.

      “this essay agrees with that high-sugar food should be more expensive”

      Overall, it’s not bad. I think you can get a 6.

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