Some People Believe That Nowadays We Have Too Many Choices

Lilie King

Lilie King

Scored a 7 on the Writing Test Twice

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

This essay question is from Cambridge IELTS 13 Test 2 Writing Task 2.

Sample Essay

It is argued that people today are confronted with an overload of options. I completely agree with this point of view because of the endless stream of information offered by online retailers and search engines.

People nowadays are bombarded with a vast selection of merchandise when shopping online. Unlike physical stores, e-commerce sites, such as Amazon and eBay, do not have space constraints. Thus, when a consumer searches for something on these sites, often hundreds if not thousands of related products appear. To compare them, they have to spend much time reading their descriptions and reviews. As a result, they may experience decision fatigue, which in turn paralyzes them.

In addition, search engines are making people suffer from information overload. In other words, people may feel overwhelmed by the number of search results they receive and end up learning nothing. Take for example those who are searching YouTube for how to get a band 7 on the IELTS writing test. In a second, they would get so many recommendations from the platform’s algorithm. They may feel they need to watch all these videos so that they do not miss out on any valuable content. But in the end, they may get confused by the different advice given by those video creators, and still not know the key to scoring high on the writing test.

In conclusion, I believe that people nowadays are faced with an excess of choices because of the amount of suggestions they get from online retailers and search engines.

252 Words

How to Paraphrase “Have Too Many Choices”

You can use the two below in your paraphrase of the question statement:
  • be confronted with an overload of options
  • be faced with an excess of choices
I also used these two in my body paragraphs:
  • a vast selection of merchandise
  • an endless stream of information

Be Careful With “Too Many Choices”

The word “Too” has a negative implication. So, we can’t simply say the kinds of choices we have. We also need to explain why this is a negative thing!

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