Team Activities Can Teach More Skills

Lilie King
Written by Lilie

7.5 in Academic Writing

October 12, 2021

Team activities can teach more important skills for life than those activities which are played alone. Do you agree or disagree?

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Sample Essay

People can learn more important life skills through group activities than through solitary activities. I completely disagree with this point of view because individual activities can train people’s abilities to concentrate and solve problems. 

To begin with, solitary activities can help people improve their concentration. This is because when doing these activities, they do not have someone else by their side to monitor and motivate them. As a result, they need to use their own willpower to resist temptations, such as Instagram posts and Youtube videos. As they exercise their willpower in solo activities, they could become better at focusing on a task for a long period of time. Since the ability to concentrate well allows a person to acquire new knowledge quickly and therefore increases their competitiveness,  it can be more valuable than the skills they can develop in team activities.

In addition, those who take part in solitary activities can become better problem solvers. This is because when facing a challenge, they have to deal with it themselves instead of leaning on their team members. For example, solo travelers in a foreign country tend to become more resourceful and faster learners in order to overcome the language barrier. The ability to tackle problems independently is extremely crucial because in life there are many crisis situations in which a person has no one to rely on.

In conclusion, I believe solitary activities teach more important skills for life than group activities because they allow people to improve concentration and problem-solving skills. (252 Words)

How to Vary Your Language

Activities Which Are Played Alone
  • Individual activities
  • Solitary activities
  • Solo activities

3 CommentsLeave A Comment

  1. when i first saw the topics, i wrote an essay on my own before seeing your answer but alas, my statement was different than yours. I agreed on my essay based on “how to manage people?” “How to make team strategy?” “learning about emotional intelligence”. These life knowledge can be learnt from team activities only.
    Basically my question was, is it ok if i can describe my statements based on my logics? shall it be a mistake for opposite statement rather than to understand my logics?

  2. The ability to tackle problems independently is extremely crucial because in life there are many crisis situations in “which” a person has no one to rely on.
    Can I use only “which” instead of “in which”?

    1. Hi, thanks for your question. No, you should not use “situations which”. You can use either “situations in which” or “situations where”.

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