Percentage of Water Used for Different Purposes in Six Areas of the World

Lilie King

Lilie King

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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

This essay question is from Cambridge IELTS 11 Test 1 Writing Task 1.

Percentage of water used for different
purposes in six areas of the world

percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

Sample Essay

The pie charts display water consumption for different purposes in six parts of the world.

Overall, agriculture is the largest consumer of water in Central Asia, Africa, Southeast Asia, and South America, while industry consumes more water than other sectors in Europe and North America.

In Central Asia, Africa and Southeast Asia, a significant proportion of water is used by agriculture, at 88, 84, and 81 percent respectively. By contrast, in none of these three areas are the proportions of water consumed by industrial or domestic users as high as 10%; the exception is Southeast Asia where industrial use reaches 12 percent.

At 71%, South America uses proportionally less agricultural water than the three areas mentioned above. However, it has the greatest proportion of residential water use of the six areas, at 19 percent.

In comparison, industry accounts for the greatest proportion of water consumption in Europe and North America, at 53 and 48 percent respectively. Households, by contrast, are the smallest user of water in these two parts of the world, at 15 percent in Europe and 13 percent in North America.

How to Group Data

I grouped the last three areas in a paragraph because their agricultural water uses are all more than 80 percent. Then, I talked about their industrial and domestic uses are all small and also pointed out the last area is an exception

For the second area, I talked about how it is different from the others.

Difference 1: It uses proportionally less agricultural water than the last three areas.
Difference 2: it has the highest percentage of domestic use of all six areas.

Lastly, I grouped the first and third areas in a paraphrase because in these two areas industry is the biggest user of water.

How to Vary Your Language

domestic use:
  • residential use/consumption

Example     Households account for the smallest proportion of water consumption in Europe.

  • household

Example     Households account for the smallest proportion of water consumption in Europe.

Example     Households consume less water than other sectors in Europe.

water use:
  • water consumption

Example     Industry accounts for the greatest proportion of water consumption in Europe.

  • consumer /user of water

Example     Industry is the largest consumer of water in Europe.

  • to consume/use water

Example     In Europe, industry consumes more water than other sectors.

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3 Responses

  1. the given pie chart illustrate the percentage of water consume by three sectors namely industrial,agriculture,domestic in six different nation. overview, It can be seen that in all given nation agriculture sector use significant water except north america and europe whereas, water consumption in domestic sector show tiny percentage approximately in all given six area. North america used 48% of water for industries and almost 2 fifth(39%) consume for agriculture but it was half usage of water as compare to africa in agriculture,although,only13%water used for domestic purpose in north america. South east asia and south america used same quantity if water for commercial sector whereas,south east consumed half water for domestic area than south america and there is not much variation in agriculture usage both nation used approximately similar amount of water. Africa utilise 84% fresh water for irrigation although, 7% and 9% water consumed in industries and agriculture respectively. next,central asia consumed has significant record of water consumption which used 88% water in agriculture and 5% least water utilised for commercial sector whereas, domestic usage slightly tiny than Africa

  2. The givn pie charts illustrate information about three main seperated water usage in six regions of the world. It reveals significant differences and similarities between those areas.
    According to the charts most of the regions have been used to water for the agricultural purpose except North America and Europe. In contrast, that two regions had been consumed the water for industrial manners with nearly a half propotion rather than others. On the other hand, the pie charts indicates the other four areas use considerably less than 10%. In addition, South America, Central Asia, Africa and South East Asia had been put up which water consumed for the agricultural section for more than 70% out of total.
    As well as that the highest percentage of a domestic use had been gone to South America with 19% and the lowest part had been gone Central Asia and South East Asia equal with 7%. Furthermore, North America and Europe had been contributed to household utilizes in simmilar fractions.

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